AN EXCERPT
By Wayne D. Barlowe
“‘Is
this the Region, this the Clime,’ said then the
Lost Archangel, ‘this the seat that we must change
for Heav’n, this mournful gloom for that celestial
light?’ “
John Milton
Paradise Lost
“Awake,
arise, or be forever
fall’n.”
John Milton
Paradise Lost
Prologue
Ash fell from a sky of umber
darkness, softening the jagged chaos of the world
below his open window. It obscured his vision so
that he could barely discern the distant, broken
towers he knew to be there. Only the star Algol,
ever-burning, ever-watchful, managed to pierce the
dark clouds and tint his room with a subtle ruddy
glow. Eligor sat motionless, as he could for
hours, watching the flakes drift down, and thought
it fitting that they should come so heavily. He
watched the tiny laborers far below, as they
tirelessly rebuilt the shattered city of
Adamantinarx. The ash fell peacefully; no burning
wind played upon its slow descent and so Eligor
could write without having to clear his desk every
few minutes.
He wrote in ferocious bursts,
punctuated only by his countless interviews and his
moments of reverie. He wrote because he felt that
he had to, and when he wrote it was in the script
of angels. Because now it was permitted. The script
had come fitfully, at first; it had been so long
since he had written in it. The long strokes of his
precious quill pen had been just a little too
precise, the terminating circles a little too
crabbed. But eventually he loosened up, remembering
his way, and the letters flew from his pen like
lightning. Soon the events of the not-so-distant
past were flowing freely and the story of the last
days of his lord, Sargatanas, took shape.
Eligor barely remembered the flight
from the battlefield back to the palace. He had
only the vague impression of passing through the
shredded clouds of war with his troops, an elite
squadron of Flying Guards, and of being so weary
that he could barely stay aloft. There was too much
to say between them, and therefore no one said
anything.
Beneath him the clouds had parted to
reveal the dark landscape. From their altitude the
world looked as it always had. Vast olive-brown
plains, like sheets of skin, rended and folded,
were cut by flowing, incandescent rivers of lava
and pocked by scattered outposts, pin-cushioned
with fiery-tipped towers. The fires of Hell still
blazed, at least, and Eligor had tried to convince
himself that all was as it had been.
On they flew, their spirits beginning
to lift, but when they entered Sargatanas’ wards
all their fantasies vanished. There were virtually
no intact buildings to be seen, so complete had
been the need for its bricks, for its souls. Where
once had been laid out a vast and bustling city,
there now was a dismal grid of tumbled blocks and
foundations. Like some newly excavated ruin the
city of Adamantinarx lay exposed and broken, its
empty streets only discernible with the greatest
effort. Colossal statues stood tilted upon pillaged
pedestals, ornamental columns were strewn like
broken bones across avenues, and the once-active
river harbor was submerged for many blocks in the
absence of its former embankment.
Sargatanas’ palace had fared little
better. Looming up from the mount in the city’s
center, it looked dark and ominous. The immense,
domed building was pierced in a thousand places,
its walls ravaged for their bricks, allowing the
wind, cinders and ash to move freely within. Eligor
closed his eyes when he first saw the palace. Here
was the home of his lord, abandoned and subject to
the fury of Hell’s fierce elements. Empty.
He and his traveling companions alit
upon the rim of the dome’s oculus and, wings
folded, peered down into the once-great Audience
Chamber. Nothing could be seen.
They descended into the darkness,
silently. As they dropped down, the only light came
from the fires guttering atop the Guard’s heads,
reflected as tiny pinpricks of flame that gleamed
back from the innumerable, distant gold columns
that ringed the space. It took many minutes to fall
to the floor and once there, many more for them to
cross the space to the exit, so great was the
chamber’s size. In the flickering flame-light they
could see only portions of the silver-white sigil -
his sigil - that was inlaid into the soot-covered
floor. Sorrow once again washed over them as they
looked at one another.
The party entered the wide corridors
and here the pierced walls allowed enough light
from outside to penetrate, creating an irregular
patchwork across the floor. Their muffled footsteps
echoed around them as they walked away from the
Audience Chamber. They did not bother to light the
torches that lined the walls, mostly because to do
so would reveal even more of the disarray. The
sighing wind from outside, they agreed, would have
extinguished them anyway.
They picked their way through the
palace, stepping around tipped-over cases, torn
tapestries, smashed friezes and tiles and the rich
furnishings that had given their lord his little
pleasure. All were covered in mounds of ash which,
when kicked up, suffused the hallways with a dense,
choking fog.
Eligor was the first to enter the
Library and all could hear his sharp intake of
breath upon seeing the devastation. He had spent so
much of his time there, most of it with his lord.
They wended their way through the giant piles of
enormous, heavy books pulled from the shelves and
left in moldering tumuli. The wind whistled over
them, rustling the pages back and forth, blowing
ash and bits of parchment in small whirlwinds
around them like swirling motes of memories.
Eventually the party split up. One by
one each Flying Guardsdemon broke away to descend
deeper, on his own, into the palace, seeking their
rooms and, perhaps, their lost purpose.
Eligor wondered what they must have thought upon
reaching them, each finding their own personal
chaos.
After clearing away a mound of debris,
Eligor entered his own chambers, high atop the main
tower, and found them to be ankle deep in ash. His
desk, still firmly growing from the floor, was an
island in a sea of cinders. His books and papers
were barely visible, scattered on the floor by the
winds which came freely in through a new and gaping
hole in the wall. Oddly, the obsidian-glassed
window was intact, banging open and closed in the
same hot wind. He pulled it shut and latched it,
feeling odd that this was his first act upon
entering his personal world. The hole yawned just
next to the window and he stood at its verge, his
cloaks and folded wings flapping, looking down at
the ground so far below. He would begin the
reconstruction of his life immediately, fill the
hole, clear the floor, tidy the shelves and set his
desk in order. He had a mission now. He had to
reveal everything. He had to tell his lord’s
story.
I
ADAMANTINARX-UPON-THE-ACHERON
There was the Fall. And no one was
permitted to speak of it, or of the time before or
of the Above. But it was the Fall that established
many things in Hell, not the least of which was the
distribution of territory. The future wards
of Hell were randomly determined as each Demon
Major, on his own sizzling trajectory from the
Above, plunged headlong, meteoric, into the unknown
wilds of the Inferno. Some impacted far apart,
setting up their realms in relative seclusion and
safety, while others, less fortunate, found
themselves in close proximity, able to see the
rising smoke of their neighbor’s arrival. These
close arrivals began plotting and campaigning as
soon as they could gather about them enough minor
demons to form a court. The fratricidal wars that
erupted lingered for millennia, occasionally
flaring up into major conflagrations. These were
the volatile times of Settlement and they were
never forgotten by the survivors. Many of Lucifer’s
original Host were lost, but those that remained,
the strong and the cunning, established powerful
kingdoms that would grow and prosper.
When Eligor Fell he found himself upon
a smoking plain cratered with the barely moving
bodies of a thousand fallen demons. They lay, as he
did, stunned, twisted by their furious descents and
glowing from myriad tiny embers. Eligor had been a
foot-soldier in the celestial Host, attached to the
seraph Sargatanas’ legions and could remember
nothing of his final moments Above. Somehow, as he
Fell, he had managed to stay near his general’s
flaming smoke-plume.
Eligor came upon Sargatanas as he
stood upon a wind-whipped bluff, unsteady, the
steam of his descent wreathing him. Transformed
from luminous seraph to Demon Major he had lost all
of his heavenly trappings and none of his dignity.
A corona of embers flitted away from his massive
head and Eligor saw it form into a great and
complicated sigil for the first time. Sargatanas
had been one of the fortunate ones, a demon who had
fallen, uncontested, in an infernal region harsh
and inhospitable, albeit rich in minerals and
perfect for city-building. Glowing milky white upon
a flat plain before them, and bending around a tall
central mount, oxbowed a slow-flowing river that
would be named Acheron. Here, Eligor somehow knew,
a great city would rise.
They stood silently, watching the
shower of fiery contrails, the paths of slower
descents as they approached their new, unwelcoming
home. Eligor glanced over at his lord. He saw
Sargatanas looking up, beyond the contrails and
beyond the clouds, and saw him close his burning
eyes.
#
A great number of demons gathered
about Sargatanas as he set about the founding of
his city. The earliest, mostly unknown to
him, were those who had descended nearby and, after
meeting with him, agreed to join his van. Others
traveling from afar, more often than not, had known
him from before the Fall and wanted to be by his
side, perhaps for comfort, in the new world.
Eligor’s intuition had proven correct;
Sargatanas had seen the same potential in the land
near where he had Fallen. The boundaries of
Sargatanas’ future city were vast, yet the Demon
Major had walked them himself, pointing out to
Eligor the specific features of the landscape that
had provoked his interest in this particular spot.
The great river, especially, had won Sargatanas
over. As he and Eligor approached its steep banks,
they smelled a distinct saltiness carried upon the
thick air.
They peered down into the languorously
flowing Acheron and both of them could see tiny
forms, indistinct and writhing, in the thick water.
An unaccountable, deep sadness filled them as their
lungs filled with the mist-laden air that rose up
and, after a moment, Sargatanas shook his great
head and spun away. The gesture surprised Eligor,
breaking the odd reverie that had fallen about him.
They left the river and ascended the
gradual rise to the projected city’s periphery
where, standing assembled in a seemingly endless
line twenty ranks deep, were countless souls. They
were a miserable, deformed crowd, crying and
trembling, as yet unaware of what was going to
befall them. Sargatanas drew himself up, smoothing
his robes as he walked toward them, deaf to the
echoing pleas that filled the air. Eligor, too,
ignored them, grown accustomed as he was, to the
souls’ ways.
They were the first arrivals, souls
who had been sent as the vanguard of humanities’
effluvia, the damned. A steady stream of them had
been arriving since shortly after the demons’ Fall
and while he was repulsed and by them and their
ways, Eligor found himself fascinated
nonetheless.
Their appearance was as grotesque as
their croaking chorus; they were as varied and
individual as the capricious laws of the demons
could create. Somewhere in Hell, somewhere Eligor
would never visit, a veritable army of lesser
demons had their way with the endless flood of
souls as they entered the realm. Legless, headless,
corkscrewed, folded, torn and pierced, each soul
wore but the thinnest mask of mankind. No two were
alike. And pushed, as if into gray clay by a
giant’s hand, into each soul was a black sphere,
heavy and dull. Sargatanas told Eligor that the
Demons Major had fashioned these globes, filled
with the essence of the souls’ transgressions to
serve not only as reminders of their punishment,
but also as a means for the demons’ control. Beyond
that he did not say but Eligor marveled at the
simplicity of it. As he and Sargatanas passed them,
Eligor looked into their fog-white eyes and
wondered what they knew, whether there was any
remnant at all of their previous lives to be found
in the gray husks.
Sargatanas approached his new
Architect General, greeting him warmly. The Demon
Major Halphas, thin and flamboyantly spined was
bedecked in layers of clacking, bone-ornamented
robes while above his head blazed his new sigil, an
elaborate device which now incorporated the sigil
of his liege, Sargatanas’, as well. Halphas was
smiling as his lord approached. Around him were a
half dozen other demons, his assistants, each of
whom looked at their lord with anticipatory
pleasure.
“My lord,” Halphas said dramatically,
his smile revealing through his destroyed cheeks
myriad tiny teeth, “we await but your command and
the walls’ foundations will be laid.”
Sargatanas examined the deep trench
and took the maps from Halphas, comparing what he
could see with the glyph-dense diagrams that
appeared on the chart. He nodded and handed them
over to Eligor who studied them briefly.
“You have done a flawless job, Lord
Halphas. It is obvious to me how much effort went
into your careful plans. And I checked the city
limits; they are just as I laid out without the
slightest deviation. Excellent!”
“Lord, I am pleased,” Halphas said
modestly in his scratchy voice. “The Overseers only
await your command.”
“We cannot begin soon enough,” said
Sargatanas. He raised his faintly steaming hand and
with a small gesture, a flick of his hand, created
a simple fiery glyph that immediately fractured and
sped off to the many attending demons. They, in
their turn, dutifully produced their own glyphs
that rose into the sky and these, flying along the
outline of the wall, galvanized the distant demons
who began the process of converting souls into
bricks. The wailing grew in intensity but none of
the demons paid it any attention. Conscious of
their lord’s presence, they were too intent upon
beginning the job at hand, as the wall’s foundation
started to take form around them.
Eligor watched in amazement; this was
the first time he had witnessed any real
construction in Hell. The techniques, he knew,
where relatively untried. As each glittering glyph
touched a selected soul upon its black sphere it
would instantly transform from a solid globe into a
thick, black liquid that flowed down into the
ground. And even as the liquid began to pool the
glyph’s true meaning impacted upon the soul,
hammering it, compressing it into a brick, wringing
out what little blood there might be and then
sending it tumbling into position in the wall.
Silencing its cries forever. And upon each brick,
stamped in relief into its wrinkled surface, was
the sigil of its lord, Sargatanas.
Black and oily Scourges, demon-tamed
Abyssals that flapped their short wings and cracked
their cranium-mounted whips, darted about keeping
the quavering souls in line. Eligor loathed them
but had to admit their effectiveness. Pressed
closely together, the clay-colored souls reacted to
the commencement of construction in various ways.
Some collapsed, some knelt sobbing, while others,
wide-eyed, looked stunned and seemed unable to
move. Most stood and pleaded at the top of their
voices while a few desperate individuals attempted
to run, though Eligor, who was watching all this
intently, could not imagine where they thought they
would go. Time and again, he would watch the
well-trained Scourges fly away in short pursuits,
mindlessly flailing them until they collapsed. Once
they were still, the souls were hooked and brought
back to the trench’s edge. None ever escaped.
The Overseers, arms out-stretched,
repeatedly created their conversion-glyphs with
such rapidity that the overall impression of the
growing wall was one of a luminous ribbon of
twinkling fire, a radiant necklace set upon the
dark bosom of the Hell.
The Overseers were, under Halphas’
able tutelage, extremely skilled; it took enormous
concentration to create, size, and shape the bricks
and set them in place quickly, and some of the
demons openly competed with their neighbors, racing
to complete their sections.
The broad trench filled smoothly and
efficiently. Huge gaps were left for the seven
massive gates that would be built. Halphas’
calculations were perfection; Sargatanas had said
many times that he thought him the best architect
in Hell. As a raw material the souls were malleable
and - best of all - plentiful. A hundred souls
every foot created the beginnings of a wall twenty
feet thick and ten feet high - nothing compared to
what the finished wall would be, but a start
nonetheless.
Eventually, as the numbers of standing
souls diminished, the wailing tapered off to be
replaced by the low moan of the hot winds. Algol
was setting; the long day’s work was done. More
souls would be collected, more wall would be
created and eventually this moment would become
nothing but a distant memory for demon and brick
alike.
When all was done for the day,
Sargatanas walked along the fresh foundation for
some distance, hands behind his back, inspecting
the site. He was smiling broadly. His city would be
built and this ceremony was its harbinger. His
elation was unmistakable and Eligor and the others
could not help but be swept up in it.
#
Eligor watched with growing wonder and
enthusiasm as Adamantinarx-upon-the-Acheron rose,
layer by layer, like a dark, growing crystal from
the fleshy ground. As a moon is to a sun, so was
Adamantinarx to the cities of Heaven. Under the
guiding hand of Sargatanas, the city’s planners did
their best with the materials at hand to emulate
the splendor of the Above. Eligor suspected that
those similarities in architecture were born merely
out of the desire of the demon-planners to live as
they had, and not meant to be a cynical parody of a
lost world. At times, as he walked the growing
streets, Eligor felt at ease, even at home. But at
other moments, moments when the memories of his
former life came to him, the dark evocation made
him sad.
The great hunts that Sargatanas
organized to rid the nearby Wastes of the Abyssal
fauna and the Primordial natives would help cheer
Eligor at these times. It was impossible for him to
not share the wild exhilaration that everyone felt,
charging through the chaotic landscape after the
fearless wildlife and he would soon forget his
sadness. The indigenous creatures of Hell posed a
continuing threat to the construction of
Adamantinarx and it was challenging, even to former
angels, to run them down and destroy them.
The city grew quickly and was
populated just as quickly. There was no shortage of
ready inhabitants. Hell, Eligor thought often,
would never have a problem filling its cities. Soon
not only demon workers, but demons of all
description as well as gray, twisted souls by the
hundreds of thousands strode the broad avenues
dwarfed by the enormous buildings; the only
requirement to existing within the city’s
boundaries was fealty to Sargatanas’ bidding.
And when Adamantinarx had grown for
ten thousand years, the two demons had found
themselves together, surveying the great city from
one of its lofty towers. Eligor, in a moment of
sincere enthusiasm, had turned to Sargatanas and
said, “This exile, my lord, has not been nearly as
grievous as we had, at first, thought. So much has
been achieved!”
Sargatanas looked at him and said,
“But Eligor, this is only the beginning of the
beginning.”
Sargatanas’ voice, all harmonics and
rumbles like the woody intake of some giant
pipe-organ, had sounded sardonic. He had no reply
for his lord. They had spent so much time in hell
already. He would always look back at that small
conversation as the moment when the enormity of
their banishment - of their shared eternity -
crystallized.
Perhaps, Eligor had thought during
this early period, this is why there is such
frenetic building. Like beasts who groom themselves
when confronted with the insoluble, the demons,
confronted with the eternity of their damnation,
built. What else could they do but attempt to make
this place their own? If they had to live in this
place forever, they would try to tame it first,
make it their own. But he knew that Hell could not
be brought to heel. It was a living place, a place
with its own will.
Sargatanas went about his tasks with a
preternatural intensity that bordered on the
obsessive. He never tired of directing the large
and small matters of state. It was, Eligor guessed,
his way of not thinking about the reality of their
situation. He seemed, too, to be preoccupied with
the affairs of his neighboring fiefdoms. His mentor
from before the Fall, Lord Astaroth, bordered his
largest ward and this pleased him. Astaroth was
old, genial, perhaps a little inept in his
governing and Sargatanas looked with some dismay at
his old teacher’s failures. But, in those early
days, he posed no threat to Sargatanas or his realm
and peace reigned.
Adamantinarx was not dissimilar, in
its composition, from many of the cities of Hell;
its flagstoned streets ran red with the blood of
its souls, its soul-bricks sighed and blinked as
one passed them and its countless low buildings
groaned and shuddered like any others in any other
infernal city. But it was also the least tortured
of Hell’s cities and its underlying openness was
due solely to Sargatanas’ will. Just as Hell’s
capital, Dis, was a horrific reflection of its
creator, Beelzebub, Adamantinarx seemed, to its
demonic inhabitants, as tolerant as its lord. There
was a difference, a nobility, to this demon. Eligor
could see it, as could any who entered his court.
When he laid the foundations, high atop the center
mount, for his many-bastioned palace, Sargatanas
consulted not only with Halphas but also with each
of his chief underlings. Eligor saw how this
openhandedness affected the court, how it served
not only to bring together each demon, but also how
it made them loyal to Sargatanas.
During one such consultation,
high atop the windswept crag, Sargatanas had
convened a general meeting to discuss the number of
tiers the palace would have. The hot, ember-laden
wind whipped Halphas’ plans about, making it hard
for all to see and Sargatanas bent down to gather a
few rocks to anchor them. When he had arisen, a
newcomer had joined the party, having climbed the
steep ascent unseen by all. Eligor’s hand went to
his sword as did a half dozen other demons’.
“Do you not know me?” the shrouded
figure asked, putting down a long, narrow box and
looking directly at Sargatanas. A long, bony needle
pierced the flesh of his hood, holding the heavy
folds closed save for a gathered hole left for
speech.
Sargatanas was a full head and a half
taller than all assembled. It was a habit of his,
when confronted or challenged, to fold his arms and
straighten up to his imposing full height. The bony
plates of his face began to shift subtly while the
flame that crowned him grew more brilliant. The
gathered demons knew the signs when he grew
impatient and each looked at one another with
anticipatory relish.
“How can I possibly know you, cloaked
as you are? Your sigil is not lit.”
“Surely you must remember me ... from
before the Fall. My voice, at least, must be
familiar.”
And of course, Eligor thought, that
was the most absurd thing he had heard in a very
long time. No one’s voice had remained the same.
The bells of the Above had left their throats long
ago, burned away by the fire and the screams. The
newcomer was playing a foolish, dangerous game.
Nonetheless, there was something compelling
about the words that made Sargatanas look more
intently at the enigmatic figure. Sargatanas’
personal Art was to divine the hidden, but,
strangely, in this case he seemed unable.
“Draw aside your hood.” The rumble in
his voice was unmistakable.
“Perhaps - if you were to ask me in
the Old Tongue...”
“My old tongue is gone. Only this
sharp one remains.”
“Well then, perhaps your ears and eyes
are as they were Above.” The figure slowly reached
up with a skin-covered, gloved hand and withdrew
the bone needle from his hood. “Micama! Adoianu
Valefar!”
“Valefar!” exclaimed Sargatanas and
rushed to embrace him.
Eligor and the others watched in
wide-eyed astonishment as their lord released the
Demon Major, the purest joy pouring forth from him.
Here, Eligor knew, was his dearest friend from
before the Fall, the loss of whom had been spoken
of only briefly, and to only a select few, for all
the long millennia. Valefar’s absence had been a
great blow to Sargatanas, as if more than just his
great heart had been torn from him by the
victorious seraphim.
“Where have you been all this time?”
“I was in Dis,” Valefar said, dropping
his chin. “I lingered there much longer than I
would have liked. It is not an easy place to leave,
once one enters.”
Sargatanas put his clawed hand upon
his friend’s shoulder. “Ah, Valefar, all that is
behind you. You are here now and here you will
stay.”
Picking up the long, metal box,
Valefar swung it easily over his shoulder, the
charred plates of his face shifting into a broad
grin.
Together they descended the mount. As
he passed, Sargatanas nodded to Halphas who began
to roll the plans into a tube; the palace could
wait.
Eligor saw how Valefar’s arrival
seemed to complete his lord. Though both figures
were physically greatly transformed by the Fall, it
was easy to see how they might have been before the
great battle. Sargatanas’ carried his looming,
flesh-cloaked form more lightly. And Valefar, who
knew his somewhat secondary role perfectly, also
knew exactly how to prize his lord away from his
dark moods. His was a lighter spirit that seemed,
to Eligor, totally out of place in Hell.